A narrative is a story that is conveyed to the audience through the use of characters.
Dans Narrative idea:
My narrative will start off in an empty forest at night. A young female will be walking home from a night out with her friends, she will then feel as if she is being followed by someone. Tense music will then be played to create suspense. After attempting to reassure herself that no one is following her she hurry's on home, at this moment she hears a creepy laugh come from the darkness, she then begins to hurry home even faster until she hears footsteps behind her. (The camera will go into handheld POV mode as she attempts to escape.)
Advantages:
- Has a female victim.
- Low key lighting can be portrayed
- The antagonist is a clown so hidden identity is used.
Disadvantages:
- No ending
- May be a bit short.
My narrative idea:
Young boy (12 years) Boy walking through posh estate at night, face is shadowed and a series of high angle shots of him walking his way down the path with eery music playing as he goes. The opening credits flash in and out of the screen, moving and flashing slightly to imitate the impression of mystery, suspense and fear, much like the opening credits in Seven which is seen bellow. Out of nowhere several people wearing masks appear and begin to chase him. He is forced to run into the forest where he falls over and hears laughter come from several directions. He screams loud and then the screen blacks out.
Advantages:
- Has hidden identity.
- Has a chase scene.
- Has tense music.
Disadvantages:
- Does not follow any theories that well.
- Audience is not connected to the victim
Reggie's narrative idea.
A young blonde female wakes up in a basement and sees the door open and she walks upstairs, while exploring the house that she has never seen before a series of different angles and camera movements are used to create suspense and fear. She hears more and more eerie, strange noises around the house, she tries to exit through the front door but it is locked. As she looks around for another way out she walks into a room to find a man wearing a hoodie and holding a knife sitting on the bed, without saying anything the man stands up and begins to walk towards her, she turns round to run away and in the chaos while suspenseful music is playing, she runs into a room and slams the door. The screen goes black and all sound stops.
Advantages:
- A conventional female victim
- There is a hidden identity
- Low key lighting can be incorporated
- Iconography - knife
Disadvantages:
- Does not closely associate itself with any theories
- No audience-character relationship is built
Theory:
Vladimir Propp proposed that characters and their role within the film are the most circumstantial features in a narrative. Examples of some of the characters you would expect to see in a Vladimir Propp film would be a hero, villain and victim.
Another theorisist by the name of Todorov concluded that
-a state of equilibrium at the outset
-a distruption of equilibrium
-a recognition of the equilibrium
-an attempt to repair this equilibrium
-back to equilibrium
is necessary within a narrative.
Aristotle believed that an incident had to occour for the character(s) to overcome and resolve for a narrative to be effective, simular to Todrov's theory.
Our thriller film however adopted Aristotle's theory and served as inspiration for our thriller opening structure. Our incident (the girls abduction) and the mystery surrounding it that is Aristotle's dramatic question (who done it) is conventional to a thriller and Aristotle's theory as it excites the audience and invokes tension.